1.题干解读：

该题目属于书信作文。题目要求是请你以Mary的身份，根据提示背景，给你的笔友John写一封60词左右的信，向他介绍一下奥运小明星全红婵，并表达你对她的祝愿。

2.写法指导：

本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称；写作中，要根据提示要点介绍全红婵的个人信息、家庭信息，最后表达你对全红婵的祝愿。文章要紧扣题目要点，千万不要遗漏要点，内容可适发挥，但要保证语句通顺，意思连贯，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句要符合英语的表达习惯，不要出现语法错误。

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请以“He/She Has Changed a Lot”为题，从外貌、性格、爱好或其他方面介绍一下你身边的一个人在这几年的变化。

要求：

1.至少写出三个变化，可适当发挥；

2.80词左右。

He/She Has Changed a Lot

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He Has Changed a Lot

My friend Jimmy has changed a lot in the last few years.

Jimmy used to be fat and eat a lot of unhealthy food.Three years ago,his doctor told him that he should do more exercise and eat healthily.So he took doctor’s advice and did more exercise to lose weight.Now he is thinner and healthier.

Jimmy used to hate the school life.One year ago,he and his parents had a long talk.That’s when he decided to change.Now he studies harder than he used to.He knows that his parents love him and they are proud of him.

Jimmy used to be shy.His face would turn red when he talked to people.Now he is more outgoing and can give speeches in public.That makes him more popular.

People sure change!I’m glad to see my friend’s great change.

详解

题干解读：

该题目是话题作文，从外貌、性格、爱好或其他方面介绍一下你身边的一个人在这几年的变化。

写作指导：

人称用第三人称；时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时；写作时，可采用“总分总”的思路来写，先说这个人在过去几年发生了很大的变化，然后具体阐述变化体现的方面，最后进行总结。注意保证内容完整、结构清晰，无语法和拼写错误。

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根据要求完成小作文。谈一谈自己的一个爱好。

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Everyone has hobbies.Hobbies give us a lot of happiness.Then what’s my hobby?My hobby is listening to music.

When I was a child,I enjoy listening to music,especially the cartoon music.As I grow up,I like all kinds of music.Though I’m not good at it,I often lose myself in it.When I am in trouble,music can make me calm down.When I am very tired,it can make me comfortable.When I am angry with something,it also can make me happy again.Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it’s good for my health.

Do you like listening to music?If not,I hope you can have a try.You’ll find it so good.

详解

1.题干解读：

题干要求谈论自己的爱好。写作时，应围绕自己的一个爱好进行介绍，并适当添加具体内容，比如，有这一爱好的原因或这一爱好的好处是什么。

2.写作指导：

本文时态应以一般现在时为主，人称主要使用第一人称。可分为三段：第一段点明自己的爱好是什么；第二段陈述这一爱好的好处；第三段对自己的爱好进行推荐并收尾。写作时，注意主谓一致，无语法和标点错误。

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中考英语作文万能模板：阐述主题题型

要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述.

1.阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.

2.分析并举例使其更充实.