一有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。

一应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。

第二档

6～10分

未恰当完成试题规定的任务。

一漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。

一语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。

一有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。

一较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。

第一档

l～5分未完成试题规定的任务。

一明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。

—语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。

一较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。

一缺乏语句间的连接成分，丙容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。

0分未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

四、One possible version

What do high school students do in their spare time? To find out，we have recently made a survey among 100 boys and 100 girls in our school.The results are as follows：

Nearly 40% of them have common interest in watching TV or going to the movies.There also exist some differences despite their similarities.Boys like to surf the Internet best.Around 60% enjoy playing games or chatting online，etc.And sports are their second choice.As for girls，about half show greatest interest in reading and shopping.Still some like surfing the Internet.However，boys seem much less interested in shopping and reading while girls like sports least.

Therefore，we call on girls to take more exercise and boys to spend less time surfing the

Internet .