9.考查并列连词。句意：一天，他和我交谈，并且希望修补我们的关系。根据语境，“talked with me”与“hoped to mend ourrelations”为顺承、递进关系，用and连接。故将or改为and。

10.考查限定词。句意：在两方的努力下，我们开始更好地理解对方。结合语境可知，此处表示作者和父亲双方，用both修饰sides，表示两方，all用于三者及以上。故将all改为both。

第二节 书面表达(满分 25 分)

52. 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。

内容包括：

1. 海洋的重要性;

2. 保护海洋的倡议。

注意：1. 词数100左右;

2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。

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【答案】

When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious.World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of oceanconservation.Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer ussufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it isimperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importanceon our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’smore, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean.The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.All in all, itis high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean isto protect ourselves.

【解析】

【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

越来越：more and more→increasingly

重视：place importance on→attach importance to

重要的：key→significant

此外：what’s more→furthermore

2句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness ofocean conservation.

拓展句：World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awarenessof ocean conservation.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also itmaintains the balance of nature.(运用了部分倒装结构)

[高分句型2]When it comes to ocean, its pollution becoming more and moreserious.(使用了固定句型)

[高分句型3]First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our dailyactions.(使用了主语从句)